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March 26th, 2010, 2:22 am

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The end.

I had a panel at the top that "explained" Wotsh's lack of aging and Yunoh's reason to jump (as if it isn't obvious) but I think it's better this way.

Edit: Updated, since MM requires text on every page. I guess this makes it a little clearer to see who jumped, though... or would, if the characters were named in-story before this page xD;

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March 30th, 2010, 11:14 pm

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That was so intriguing and melancholy!
But I kind of wish there was that extra panel? Or maybe you can make an "extra" extra and add it just for our further enlightenment?
Because when it's zoomed out it's difficult to see, though I assume the blind character jumped. But why, if the sky wasn't really the real sky?
(lol I shouldn't read deep comics when I'm this sleep depriveddd)

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March 31st, 2010, 9:42 am

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She jumped because she realized she can't see the real sky and that if she couldn't reach it after so many years, she'll probably never reach it (Yunoh is not an optimist).
At least that's my reading of it, it's no more valid than yours.

Edit: Actually... maybe she just walked off by accident, given the minimal buildup ;D She is blind but hasn't developed super perception yet, and that walkway is narrow and has no handrails.
This is an option opened up by the text, without it Wotsh took it calmly, which made it seem like she was expecting it. She couldn't have expected it, as she would have stopped it.

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